Have you considered getting a proofreader? A few typos aren't a big deal, but some of the dialogue is very stiff and awkward, and takes me out of the experience.
Alright, so, just finished the demo, really good, some notes. First thing: throughout the game there are a number of small typos and a few examples of odd word choice. I can't give any exact examples, and occasionally it might've been intentional, but there were a number of times where it felt distinctly incorrect. Neither typos nor weird word choice ruin the game by any means, but it seems like an easy, (if time-consuming, to go through all the dialogue,) fix. As an aside, the MC himself can come across as overly formal in situations where it isn't called for, fancy magic school or otherwise. Second main note: oh my god this is easily the most well animated visual novel I've ever played, seriously. The characters moving during dialogue and blinking and stuff, it gives the game so much character. Literally everything, from the little interactable sprites in the world to the individual facial expressions is, to my eyes, perfect. Only three issues with the art. Well, okay, loosely related to the art, really just graphical things. All pretty minor. In a later conversation, involving Celine [said Lilith before edit whoops], when the dialogue starts Annie appears next to the MC as usual, but then teleports over to Celine's side of the screen and stays there until she leaves. Pretty odd, but a very minor one-time bug. Another thing, still involving Annie, is in the last scene with her unlocked in the demo, where her skin color is much more red than it is at any other point. Like, in all other (colored) appearances, she looks sorta dark pink (magenta, probably,) but in the scene, she's flat red. Also, her horns are missing in the entirety of that scene, even the foreplay cutscene (I guess all the game is kind of a cutscene, but... you know what I mean). Probably everything I just mentioned is due to the scene being added in the last update, and (presumably, given its placement as the literal last thing before the end-of-demo screen,) it was the last thing done before release. As for my third issue, in dialogue when characters talk they animate a little bit, and over the course of the entire demo, there would be the occasional time where it would look like someone was animating when a different character was speaking. That's all my critiques really, asides from the fact that there ain't enough of this. It's amazing. Oh maybe make it so we can replay previous story scenes, particularly Annie's (scene where she's slightly under the covers as an example). Talked about Annie a lot here, uh... look, she's just really cute, and nervous, and she clearly needs a hug. I regret nothing.
"How to complete the Holy Hunt quest??!! I don't understand at what time I go to Forest nothing happens, please tell me" Translated. It appears that it's still in development.
game is great but there are two things i recommend changed.
First, add art to the cutscene where the protagonist is picking noses. I recommend a picture of Jade being covered in so many plushies that only her head is visible. I just think it would be cute and better than the nothing that is there at the moment.
The other change, and the more serious one, is expanding the cake quest. As is, the cake quest is confusing since we go from Jade going to the principal for permission to use the kitchen to us going the principal for some reason. How I would expand it would be that after Jade mentions going to the principal that we cut to the kitchen where the protagonist looks around the kitchen surprised at how it looks while Jade immediately begins looking at the ingredients and utensils. As she does, she begins to shake her ass unintentionally at first and, after noticing the protagonist staring, on purpose. She than notices that there are no eggs and ask you to ask the staff if there are more somewhere (she can't go because she has to prepare everything else). From here two things can be done and that is to either keep everything the same as in game or add three more parts (one for each staff member that is not the principal). The maid would say she would get more eggs later, the nurse would "I don't know" only to later say to molly bot, when the protagonist is gone, that she has been caught causing the player to lose the cookie quest again, and the teacher would try to help, despite her suspicion, only to be interrupted by Elizabeth.
We all know that humans are banned from the realm. (Maeve mentioned it)
And I know the reason for that.
And that is COLONIZERS, yes. Let me explain, what did napoleon do irl? Yup, he went to a land unknown for him and stole the women for sex slaves, maybe humans did it as well there. And they did, they went in and stole some elves as their slaves. But the elves fought back and that resulted with humans getting banned from the realm
And since it was centuries ago they forgot how does a man looks like, that's why Maeve was surprised by seeing the player looking like them and maybe they also forced their religion onto others, making the elf church a thing and the reason the priest wears familiar clothes to the ones in real life
Good game, the story seems generic at first but it's really cool I really like the characters too (In Special Maeves, i like tall womans lol). What sometimes bothers me is how the game distorts itself just for some NSFW scene to happen, it seems forced and takes away a little from the immersion of the general world, it reminds you that it is a porn game after all.
Ill wait 6 more months for the next update cant believe I played this game for 300 days I appreciate u put so much effort for people that are interested in the story in appreciation for the most interesting porn story here's this cute Lil cat for a little bit of innocence
Hello internet welcome to malware theory first theory
1) I think that elves know some secret shit connected to the world because they have better technology then us and the rest of the "realm" is like it was in 1600s never seen a tube sucking in two people to a secret lab like some mark Rober video
2) I think Maeve can actually teleport to different realms or just can read stuff from other universes but we've seen the mc get teleported and movie knows what a male already is without the mc
3) I think that Maeve was a past student of the h.m academy and she learned really well and she got teleported from earth to this world since she knows what a man is and only her close friends know from spreading it like Celine and Elizabeth (this is a continuation of the 2nd one but the more probable one I guess?)
4) I dunno burger break?
5) Celine is best
6) just wanna make it to ten
7) this is the only sense of joy I get from this unforgiving earth
8) I do not have much proof for this theory but at some point I think another male will be in the game ? Disguising? Like a ladyboy from Thailand and he could be a powerful wizard since only strong sorcerers can disguise themselves as women? What if Arthur wasn't the only male one who could do magic
9) the size of Arthur's banana (not his joystick) Arthur's banana is roughly the size of his pp since Arthur is about 5.11 and his legs size is about 3.7 looking at his size having about 4 or 5 of em stacked together 7-9 inches lets say for balance 8 inches since the banana is bent it is two inches smaller then Arthur's pp so 6 inch banana which is very big for one
10) im not sane I researched to measure Arthur's banana he rose up with his wand
Genuinely such an amazing foundation, the art is fantastic, the writing and characters are great (Even if there are a few spelling/grammar mistakes here and there), the smut scenes are both animated and written really well, and even the story is quite engaging!
The outfit customization is such a nice feature too!
Very excited to follow this game´s future development.
Guys, hear me out. I know it's been a long time since I actually spoke out (no it wasn't) so, I will be doing my theories about this game 🗿 they get more interesting over time. Now let's get started
1.) Arthur and Jade will get married if played the game correctly and unlock some type of "good" ending when the game is in it's full release
2.) Nazi German engineers influenced the coming of technology in the realm and gave the blueprints to the elves in the 1940's
3.) 𝗟𝘂𝗹𝘂 𝗶𝘀 𝗹𝘆𝗶𝗻𝗴 𝗮𝗯𝗼𝘂𝘁 𝗵𝗲𝗿 𝗮𝗴𝗲
4.) Maeve was secretly a man before becoming a woman.
5.) Agnes may be more than 100 years old, making the age gap between MC and her crazy as hell. Fuck it, she may be 200! Or 300!
6.) Elena is secretly tied to a satanic group in Westpell that works with none other than Pandora herself in order to kill off magic and let technology rise.
7.) Since there are no boys in the magic realm, woman there had to reproduce by using other male animals or monsters as a resource to acquire sperm so they could magically join it with the eggs so people and elves could propagate
8.) Dahlia isn't on screen to much because she is secretly a demon and is hiding the bodies of 2 thousand witches and innocent people under her store.
9.) If a black character is introduced, it will concluded that there was a similar practice of slavery in the realm and there was once a triangular slave trade that transported people.
10.) Elizabeth is carrying her but backpack around because she can't store in the lockers due to her not having a sense of humor. Actually, that's not a theory... Nvm
So yeah guys, that's all the theories i could come up. I did the most valuable digging of information so I could come up with these things. Now, please take this theories with a grain of salt. After all
Edit: not gonna lie, I kinda believe in the ninth theory
Edit #2: if not mistaken, Elena is a priest, what is she worshipping? Jesus? If So that means a Jesus female version came there and died for their sins?
Hey guys I know I haven't said anything in a while but I'm here for the news, it's possible that I will beat my cancer. But I will give you guys updated ( approximately in like a month or two, anyways Cya! ♥️)
I am not done yet, but I enjoy it. I like good wholesome, vanilla fun. Cute girls too. Though the thing that made me like it most funnily was one of the tracks in the OST. I tried looking for the credits because there was one song that sounded like C418 music and it was an absolute banger. A lot of times music in these games sounds too dramatic or there's just too much noise.
I just sperged about a track with a simple melody. Lmao
Muy buen arte y su música me encanta y la historia es demasiado bueno aunque no se le entiende un vrgo porque está en inglés pero lo demás es hermoso, tremenda obra maestra
well,i don't think I met her with lilith.Lilith bring us to Meave and met a red girl on the road?But this time is Meave cast a spell first then we see lilith.
This isn't something important,but i think i should report this lol
And when i give a cake to the demon,we mention lilith again.
I'm a little worried.i do remember i touched lilith's boob in earlier version,and this time I touched midnight. Would that be a little embarrassing if it is important lol.
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does this game have /get Breast expansion?
Minecraft command type shit
/get breast expansion
/give (user) minecraft:mommy_milkers 2
I wonder how many days before the comment section starts to cry about no update again
Have you considered getting a proofreader? A few typos aren't a big deal, but some of the dialogue is very stiff and awkward, and takes me out of the experience.
Therapist: bald black Maeve isn't real. It can't hurt you
Bald Black Maeve:
Credit to the trashbag.
lmao what?
🔥 bro so much potential to, keep it up!
Esta muy bueno ,el ingles esta medio raro pero entendible
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It's very good, the English is kind of weird but understandable
New maeve design very meh, Celine's creepy smile to serious is gone, apart from that its getting better overall
please add an option that allows us to skip straight to the new content instead of having to play through what we already played through again
Guys did I cook? 🗣️🔥 Giving free cuts
Its burnt so hard 💯🔥
never let bro cook again 🔥🔥🔥🔥
WHAT IS THISS... YOU DID ELENA DIRTY BRO... and what is that forehead Lilith has🔥🔥🔥🔥 and the rest, their heads look like a potato chip
Bro, you guys are done for 😭😭
My eyes its burning
elena or whatever the elf priest is kinda looks like him
😭
cooked
Love the art and the character writing. Can't wait to see more!
ngl chief this goes hard
amateur
Alright, so, just finished the demo, really good, some notes. First thing: throughout the game there are a number of small typos and a few examples of odd word choice. I can't give any exact examples, and occasionally it might've been intentional, but there were a number of times where it felt distinctly incorrect. Neither typos nor weird word choice ruin the game by any means, but it seems like an easy, (if time-consuming, to go through all the dialogue,) fix.As an aside, the MC himself can come across as overly formal in situations where it isn't called for, fancy magic school or otherwise. Second main note: oh my god this is easily the most well animated visual novel I've ever played, seriously. The characters moving during dialogue and blinking and stuff, it gives the game so much character. Literally everything, from the little interactable sprites in the world to the individual facial expressions is, to my eyes, perfect. Only three issues with the art. Well, okay, loosely related to the art, really just graphical things. All pretty minor. In a later conversation, involving Celine [said Lilith before edit whoops], when the dialogue starts Annie appears next to the MC as usual, but then teleports over to Celine's side of the screen and stays there until she leaves. Pretty odd, but a very minor one-time bug. Another thing, still involving Annie, is in the last scene with her unlocked in the demo, where her skin color is much more red than it is at any other point. Like, in all other (colored) appearances, she looks sorta dark pink (magenta, probably,) but in the scene, she's flat red. Also, her horns are missing in the entirety of that scene, even the foreplay cutscene (I guess all the game is kind of a cutscene, but... you know what I mean). Probably everything I just mentioned is due to the scene being added in the last update, and (presumably, given its placement as the literal last thing before the end-of-demo screen,) it was the last thing done before release. As for my third issue, in dialogue when characters talk they animate a little bit, and over the course of the entire demo, there would be the occasional time where it would look like someone was animating when a different character was speaking. That's all my critiques really, asides from the fact that there ain't enough of this. It's amazing. Oh maybe make it so we can replay previous story scenes, particularly Annie's (scene where she's slightly under the covers as an example). Talked about Annie a lot here, uh... look, she's just really cute, and nervous, and she clearly needs a hug. I regret nothing.alright bud thats enough yapping
Как пройти квест Holy Hunt??!! я не понимаю в какое бы время не пошёл бы в Forest ничего не происходит, подскажите пожалуйста_)(_
"How to complete the Holy Hunt quest??!! I don't understand at what time I go to Forest nothing happens, please tell me" Translated. It appears that it's still in development.
Same here plz when you get the answer tell me
Its still in development i think, so its not finished yet maybe in the next update
Квест всё ещё находится в разработке
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The quest is still in development
game is great but there are two things i recommend changed.
First, add art to the cutscene where the protagonist is picking noses. I recommend a picture of Jade being covered in so many plushies that only her head is visible. I just think it would be cute and better than the nothing that is there at the moment.
The other change, and the more serious one, is expanding the cake quest. As is, the cake quest is confusing since we go from Jade going to the principal for permission to use the kitchen to us going the principal for some reason. How I would expand it would be that after Jade mentions going to the principal that we cut to the kitchen where the protagonist looks around the kitchen surprised at how it looks while Jade immediately begins looking at the ingredients and utensils. As she does, she begins to shake her ass unintentionally at first and, after noticing the protagonist staring, on purpose. She than notices that there are no eggs and ask you to ask the staff if there are more somewhere (she can't go because she has to prepare everything else). From here two things can be done and that is to either keep everything the same as in game or add three more parts (one for each staff member that is not the principal). The maid would say she would get more eggs later, the nurse would "I don't know" only to later say to molly bot, when the protagonist is gone, that she has been caught causing the player to lose the cookie quest again, and the teacher would try to help, despite her suspicion, only to be interrupted by Elizabeth.
Again, great game. I just want these two changes.
Drunktheory time
So.
We all know that humans are banned from the realm. (Maeve mentioned it)
And I know the reason for that.
And that is COLONIZERS, yes. Let me explain, what did napoleon do irl? Yup, he went to a land unknown for him and stole the women for sex slaves, maybe humans did it as well there. And they did, they went in and stole some elves as their slaves. But the elves fought back and that resulted with humans getting banned from the realm
And since it was centuries ago they forgot how does a man looks like, that's why Maeve was surprised by seeing the player looking like them and maybe they also forced their religion onto others, making the elf church a thing and the reason the priest wears familiar clothes to the ones in real life
But hey thats just a theory, a porn theory!
Did he cook? Yes. Should he have? Nah. Never let bro cook again.
:3
Thank you for new update <3
Interesting game, probably will wait till Lulu gets more content
the self report
cry harder bozo
Как скажешь
let us fuck celine ugh
props for honesty
A fellow man of culture. I wanna fuck the nurse too.
Is there no audio or music in the game? The main menu has music and there are audio settings, but nothing is playing for me. Is it a bug?
Ill wait 6 more months for the next update cant believe I played this game for 300 days I appreciate u put so much effort for people that are interested in the story in appreciation for the most interesting porn story here's this cute Lil cat for a little bit of innocence
adorable
This is the only game that makes me read the dialogue
Hello internet welcome to malware theory first theory
1) I think that elves know some secret shit connected to the world because they have better technology then us and the rest of the "realm" is like it was in 1600s never seen a tube sucking in two people to a secret lab like some mark Rober video
2) I think Maeve can actually teleport to different realms or just can read stuff from other universes but we've seen the mc get teleported and movie knows what a male already is without the mc
3) I think that Maeve was a past student of the h.m academy and she learned really well and she got teleported from earth to this world since she knows what a man is and only her close friends know from spreading it like Celine and Elizabeth (this is a continuation of the 2nd one but the more probable one I guess?)
4) I dunno burger break?
5) Celine is best
6) just wanna make it to ten
7) this is the only sense of joy I get from this unforgiving earth
8) I do not have much proof for this theory but at some point I think another male will be in the game ? Disguising? Like a ladyboy from Thailand and he could be a powerful wizard since only strong sorcerers can disguise themselves as women? What if Arthur wasn't the only male one who could do magic
9) the size of Arthur's banana (not his joystick) Arthur's banana is roughly the size of his pp since Arthur is about 5.11 and his legs size is about 3.7 looking at his size having about 4 or 5 of em stacked together 7-9 inches lets say for balance 8 inches since the banana is bent it is two inches smaller then Arthur's pp so 6 inch banana which is very big for one
10) im not sane I researched to measure Arthur's banana he rose up with his wand
Add tentacles scenes :)
no
i just created an account to comment on how fire this game is
10/10 would bag celine
SAME BRO
Celine is #1
Genuinely such an amazing foundation, the art is fantastic, the writing and characters are great (Even if there are a few spelling/grammar mistakes here and there), the smut scenes are both animated and written really well, and even the story is quite engaging!
The outfit customization is such a nice feature too!
Very excited to follow this game´s future development.
Also Agnes is best girl.
Guys, hear me out. I know it's been a long time since I actually spoke out (no it wasn't) so, I will be doing my theories about this game 🗿 they get more interesting over time. Now let's get started
1.) Arthur and Jade will get married if played the game correctly and unlock some type of "good" ending when the game is in it's full release
2.) Nazi German engineers influenced the coming of technology in the realm and gave the blueprints to the elves in the 1940's
3.) 𝗟𝘂𝗹𝘂 𝗶𝘀 𝗹𝘆𝗶𝗻𝗴 𝗮𝗯𝗼𝘂𝘁 𝗵𝗲𝗿 𝗮𝗴𝗲
4.) Maeve was secretly a man before becoming a woman.
5.) Agnes may be more than 100 years old, making the age gap between MC and her crazy as hell. Fuck it, she may be 200! Or 300!
6.) Elena is secretly tied to a satanic group in Westpell that works with none other than Pandora herself in order to kill off magic and let technology rise.
7.) Since there are no boys in the magic realm, woman there had to reproduce by using other male animals or monsters as a resource to acquire sperm so they could magically join it with the eggs so people and elves could propagate
8.) Dahlia isn't on screen to much because she is secretly a demon and is hiding the bodies of 2 thousand witches and innocent people under her store.
9.) If a black character is introduced, it will concluded that there was a similar practice of slavery in the realm and there was once a triangular slave trade that transported people.
10.) Elizabeth is carrying her but backpack around because she can't store in the lockers due to her not having a sense of humor. Actually, that's not a theory... Nvm
So yeah guys, that's all the theories i could come up. I did the most valuable digging of information so I could come up with these things. Now, please take this theories with a grain of salt. After all
BRO IS COOKING, WHO IS LETTING BRO COOK! ):
Edit: not gonna lie, I kinda believe in the ninth theory
Edit #2: if not mistaken, Elena is a priest, what is she worshipping? Jesus? If So that means a Jesus female version came there and died for their sins?
Only this one is real 💀
lore update when
i believe you
slavery is not a bad thing
edit: play rimworld
Does anyone know the identity of that talking mushroom in the forest ?
Hey guys I know I haven't said anything in a while but I'm here for the news, it's possible that I will beat my cancer. But I will give you guys updated ( approximately in like a month or two, anyways Cya! ♥️)
Stay safe buddy
Hey man, good to know you are doing better. Stay strong!
THATS MY FUCKING GOAT YOU LEGEND
Stay strong bud, see you soon.
I am not done yet, but I enjoy it. I like good wholesome, vanilla fun. Cute girls too. Though the thing that made me like it most funnily was one of the tracks in the OST. I tried looking for the credits because there was one song that sounded like C418 music and it was an absolute banger. A lot of times music in these games sounds too dramatic or there's just too much noise.
I just sperged about a track with a simple melody. Lmao
My task got stuck. He asked me to go to the forest, but it was useless for me to go. Did I skip something?
it's not finished yet
how to borger?
Seems like Annie lost her paper,but she kept the 'yes' with her.
Muy buen arte y su música me encanta y la historia es demasiado bueno aunque no se le entiende un vrgo porque está en inglés pero lo demás es hermoso, tremenda obra maestra
pregnacy?
coming on february 29th of 2025 :D
...
sex
well,i don't think I met her with lilith.Lilith bring us to Meave and met a red girl on the road?But this time is Meave cast a spell first then we see lilith.
This isn't something important,but i think i should report this lol
Another found,when we talk with Dr.Celine,we will mention the forest where we met a demon.
Met a demon with lilith.
We all know that we didn't. lilith was waiting for us in hallway.
So I guess we changed a little bit of the story, but we don't look at the other part?
And when i give a cake to the demon,we mention lilith again.
I'm a little worried.i do remember i touched lilith's boob in earlier version,and this time I touched midnight. Would that be a little embarrassing if it is important lol.
Me quedé atrapado después de que Annie llegué a la academia ya no se que hacer
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