Once had this happen to the friend of the main character (forgot her name :/). This was an update ago, where she wasn't supposed to have a naked option.
Made an account just to say how much I enjoy the game so far. Downloaded it today and got all the way to the end of the current content, can't wait for more updates! Keep up the amazing work.
Hello sir, I just translated your comment, and I would like to let you know the creator has left a little note about that topic
"'Are you going to add translations?' Maybe after the game is done, but we have no interest in it at the moment." Sorry if this is a bad translation, I speak English and am currently using google translate.
This game is really amazing, I like al the detail and time it went into making it personally I felt I needed to donate for it giving at least 8.00 to it. More than anything I'm excited to see this game grow and hopefully get even better than how it is now. If you decide to add voice acting too let me know I dabble a little bit into voice acting and impressionism. Thank You
Have you considered getting a proofreader? A few typos aren't a big deal, but some of the dialogue is very stiff and awkward, and takes me out of the experience.
Alright, so, just finished the demo, really good, some notes. First thing: throughout the game there are a number of small typos and a few examples of odd word choice. I can't give any exact examples, and occasionally it might've been intentional, but there were a number of times where it felt distinctly incorrect. Neither typos nor weird word choice ruin the game by any means, but it seems like an easy, (if time-consuming, to go through all the dialogue,) fix. As an aside, the MC himself can come across as overly formal in situations where it isn't called for, fancy magic school or otherwise. Second main note: oh my god this is easily the most well animated visual novel I've ever played, seriously. The characters moving during dialogue and blinking and stuff, it gives the game so much character. Literally everything, from the little interactable sprites in the world to the individual facial expressions is, to my eyes, perfect. Only three issues with the art. Well, okay, loosely related to the art, really just graphical things. All pretty minor. In a later conversation, involving Celine [said Lilith before edit whoops], when the dialogue starts Annie appears next to the MC as usual, but then teleports over to Celine's side of the screen and stays there until she leaves. Pretty odd, but a very minor one-time bug. Another thing, still involving Annie, is in the last scene with her unlocked in the demo, where her skin color is much more red than it is at any other point. Like, in all other (colored) appearances, she looks sorta dark pink (magenta, probably,) but in the scene, she's flat red. Also, her horns are missing in the entirety of that scene, even the foreplay cutscene (I guess all the game is kind of a cutscene, but... you know what I mean). Probably everything I just mentioned is due to the scene being added in the last update, and (presumably, given its placement as the literal last thing before the end-of-demo screen,) it was the last thing done before release. As for my third issue, in dialogue when characters talk they animate a little bit, and over the course of the entire demo, there would be the occasional time where it would look like someone was animating when a different character was speaking. That's all my critiques really, asides from the fact that there ain't enough of this. It's amazing. Oh maybe make it so we can replay previous story scenes, particularly Annie's (scene where she's slightly under the covers as an example). Talked about Annie a lot here, uh... look, she's just really cute, and nervous, and she clearly needs a hug. I regret nothing.
"How to complete the Holy Hunt quest??!! I don't understand at what time I go to Forest nothing happens, please tell me" Translated. It appears that it's still in development.
game is great but there are two things i recommend changed.
First, add art to the cutscene where the protagonist is picking noses. I recommend a picture of Jade being covered in so many plushies that only her head is visible. I just think it would be cute and better than the nothing that is there at the moment.
The other change, and the more serious one, is expanding the cake quest. As is, the cake quest is confusing since we go from Jade going to the principal for permission to use the kitchen to us going the principal for some reason. How I would expand it would be that after Jade mentions going to the principal that we cut to the kitchen where the protagonist looks around the kitchen surprised at how it looks while Jade immediately begins looking at the ingredients and utensils. As she does, she begins to shake her ass unintentionally at first and, after noticing the protagonist staring, on purpose. She than notices that there are no eggs and ask you to ask the staff if there are more somewhere (she can't go because she has to prepare everything else). From here two things can be done and that is to either keep everything the same as in game or add three more parts (one for each staff member that is not the principal). The maid would say she would get more eggs later, the nurse would "I don't know" only to later say to molly bot, when the protagonist is gone, that she has been caught causing the player to lose the cookie quest again, and the teacher would try to help, despite her suspicion, only to be interrupted by Elizabeth.
We all know that humans are banned from the realm. (Maeve mentioned it)
And I know the reason for that.
And that is COLONIZERS, yes. Let me explain, what did napoleon do irl? Yup, he went to a land unknown for him and stole the women for sex slaves, maybe humans did it as well there. And they did, they went in and stole some elves as their slaves. But the elves fought back and that resulted with humans getting banned from the realm
And since it was centuries ago they forgot how does a man looks like, that's why Maeve was surprised by seeing the player looking like them and maybe they also forced their religion onto others, making the elf church a thing and the reason the priest wears familiar clothes to the ones in real life
Good game, the story seems generic at first but it's really cool I really like the characters too (In Special Maeves, i like tall womans lol). What sometimes bothers me is how the game distorts itself just for some NSFW scene to happen, it seems forced and takes away a little from the immersion of the general world, it reminds you that it is a porn game after all.
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NIGA I WANT THAT PUSY NOW እግዚአብሔር መልካም ነው እግዚአብሔር ታላቅ ነው።
Please let me marry Annie shes too precious...NOW
So uh we can't f*ck Lilith?
Guys. She wasn't ready for what was about to come 😔
Guys, it's been four months. We need that pussy from Celine and Maeve NOW
Edit: nvm guys my clock was wrong. My clock was ahead of time
The game is very good. I finished very quickly. I liked the stories and interactions. Now just wait for more.
Eagerly awaiting the next update, I hope it doesn't take too long
oopsie im a bit late w this
Super rare glitch occurrence ༎ຶ‿༎ຶ
Damnit, I should have censored it, nvm too late ):
holup
why is one boob bigger than the other
This comment is hilarious. Most girls have one bigger than the other.
There must be a logical and reasonable explanation to this conundrum
Yeah bro, there must be
yeah there must be
there has to be
Your question will be answered, it will not remain a MYSTERY ANY LONGER
Once had this happen to the friend of the main character (forgot her name :/). This was an update ago, where she wasn't supposed to have a naked option.
I'll wait for the news updates for now, it's a good game!
I would like some more customization on my lil mans
Put that man in a tux with sunglasses and ill be jacking off to something else tonight
Made an account just to say how much I enjoy the game so far. Downloaded it today and got all the way to the end of the current content, can't wait for more updates! Keep up the amazing work.
same bro same
these comments are fresh af wtf ToT
Anyways, downloading the game rn. From what I've read, it should be good! Hope I can enjoy :)))
I'm convinced half of us has a mental disability (I'm one of them)
im genuinely afraid im autistic cause im more of an autist than my brother and hes diagnosed lol
请问，可以出中文吗？
"Excuse me, but can it be published in Chinese?"
您好，先生，我刚刚翻译了您的评论，我想让您知道创建者已经留下了关于该主题的一些注释
“‘你要添加翻译吗？’也许比赛结束后，但我们目前对此没有兴趣。”抱歉，如果翻译不好，我会说英语，目前正在使用谷歌翻译。
简而言之，他们正在考虑这个问题。
Hello sir, I just translated your comment, and I would like to let you know the creator has left a little note about that topic
"'Are you going to add translations?' Maybe after the game is done, but we have no interest in it at the moment." Sorry if this is a bad translation, I speak English and am currently using google translate.
In short, they're thinking about it.
Loved the story and was a good experience for my first game like this. Please hurry with the update I want more!
We played the Game and the story is good, also the art style is cute. This game have a lot of potential especially with Character development
All of us is waiting for the new update to drop!
Keep up the good work King!
Add more to free one plz
This game is really amazing, I like al the detail and time it went into making it personally I felt I needed to donate for it giving at least 8.00 to it. More than anything I'm excited to see this game grow and hopefully get even better than how it is now. If you decide to add voice acting too let me know I dabble a little bit into voice acting and impressionism. Thank You
Story good, wholesome, got here via TheArcadean, how shall I assist?
does this game have /get Breast expansion?
Minecraft command type shit
/get breast expansion
/give (user) minecraft:mommy_milkers 2
I wonder how many days before the comment section starts to cry about no update again
Have you considered getting a proofreader? A few typos aren't a big deal, but some of the dialogue is very stiff and awkward, and takes me out of the experience.
Therapist: bald black Maeve isn't real. It can't hurt you
Bald Black Maeve:
Credit to the trashbag.
lmao what?
🔥 bro so much potential to, keep it up!
Esta muy bueno ,el ingles esta medio raro pero entendible
Translate:
It's very good, the English is kind of weird but understandable
New maeve design very meh, Celine's creepy smile to serious is gone, apart from that its getting better overall
please add an option that allows us to skip straight to the new content instead of having to play through what we already played through again
Guys did I cook? 🗣️🔥 Giving free cuts
Its burnt so hard 💯🔥
never let bro cook again 🔥🔥🔥🔥
WHAT IS THISS... YOU DID ELENA DIRTY BRO... and what is that forehead Lilith has🔥🔥🔥🔥 and the rest, their heads look like a potato chip
Bro, you guys are done for 😭😭
My eyes its burning
elena or whatever the elf priest is kinda looks like him
😭
cooked
Love the art and the character writing. Can't wait to see more!
ngl chief this goes hard
amateur
Alright, so, just finished the demo, really good, some notes. First thing: throughout the game there are a number of small typos and a few examples of odd word choice. I can't give any exact examples, and occasionally it might've been intentional, but there were a number of times where it felt distinctly incorrect. Neither typos nor weird word choice ruin the game by any means, but it seems like an easy, (if time-consuming, to go through all the dialogue,) fix.As an aside, the MC himself can come across as overly formal in situations where it isn't called for, fancy magic school or otherwise. Second main note: oh my god this is easily the most well animated visual novel I've ever played, seriously. The characters moving during dialogue and blinking and stuff, it gives the game so much character. Literally everything, from the little interactable sprites in the world to the individual facial expressions is, to my eyes, perfect. Only three issues with the art. Well, okay, loosely related to the art, really just graphical things. All pretty minor. In a later conversation, involving Celine [said Lilith before edit whoops], when the dialogue starts Annie appears next to the MC as usual, but then teleports over to Celine's side of the screen and stays there until she leaves. Pretty odd, but a very minor one-time bug. Another thing, still involving Annie, is in the last scene with her unlocked in the demo, where her skin color is much more red than it is at any other point. Like, in all other (colored) appearances, she looks sorta dark pink (magenta, probably,) but in the scene, she's flat red. Also, her horns are missing in the entirety of that scene, even the foreplay cutscene (I guess all the game is kind of a cutscene, but... you know what I mean). Probably everything I just mentioned is due to the scene being added in the last update, and (presumably, given its placement as the literal last thing before the end-of-demo screen,) it was the last thing done before release. As for my third issue, in dialogue when characters talk they animate a little bit, and over the course of the entire demo, there would be the occasional time where it would look like someone was animating when a different character was speaking. That's all my critiques really, asides from the fact that there ain't enough of this. It's amazing. Oh maybe make it so we can replay previous story scenes, particularly Annie's (scene where she's slightly under the covers as an example). Talked about Annie a lot here, uh... look, she's just really cute, and nervous, and she clearly needs a hug. I regret nothing.alright bud thats enough yapping
Как пройти квест Holy Hunt??!! я не понимаю в какое бы время не пошёл бы в Forest ничего не происходит, подскажите пожалуйста_)(_
"How to complete the Holy Hunt quest??!! I don't understand at what time I go to Forest nothing happens, please tell me" Translated. It appears that it's still in development.
Same here plz when you get the answer tell me
Its still in development i think, so its not finished yet maybe in the next update
Квест всё ещё находится в разработке
Translate:
The quest is still in development
game is great but there are two things i recommend changed.
First, add art to the cutscene where the protagonist is picking noses. I recommend a picture of Jade being covered in so many plushies that only her head is visible. I just think it would be cute and better than the nothing that is there at the moment.
The other change, and the more serious one, is expanding the cake quest. As is, the cake quest is confusing since we go from Jade going to the principal for permission to use the kitchen to us going the principal for some reason. How I would expand it would be that after Jade mentions going to the principal that we cut to the kitchen where the protagonist looks around the kitchen surprised at how it looks while Jade immediately begins looking at the ingredients and utensils. As she does, she begins to shake her ass unintentionally at first and, after noticing the protagonist staring, on purpose. She than notices that there are no eggs and ask you to ask the staff if there are more somewhere (she can't go because she has to prepare everything else). From here two things can be done and that is to either keep everything the same as in game or add three more parts (one for each staff member that is not the principal). The maid would say she would get more eggs later, the nurse would "I don't know" only to later say to molly bot, when the protagonist is gone, that she has been caught causing the player to lose the cookie quest again, and the teacher would try to help, despite her suspicion, only to be interrupted by Elizabeth.
Again, great game. I just want these two changes.
Drunktheory time
So.
We all know that humans are banned from the realm. (Maeve mentioned it)
And I know the reason for that.
And that is COLONIZERS, yes. Let me explain, what did napoleon do irl? Yup, he went to a land unknown for him and stole the women for sex slaves, maybe humans did it as well there. And they did, they went in and stole some elves as their slaves. But the elves fought back and that resulted with humans getting banned from the realm
And since it was centuries ago they forgot how does a man looks like, that's why Maeve was surprised by seeing the player looking like them and maybe they also forced their religion onto others, making the elf church a thing and the reason the priest wears familiar clothes to the ones in real life
But hey thats just a theory, a porn theory!
Did he cook? Yes. Should he have? Nah. Never let bro cook again.
:3
Thank you for new update <3
Interesting game, probably will wait till Lulu gets more content
the self report
cry harder bozo
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